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creative writing feedback

Unleash Your Child's Inner Writer

11 Plus creative writing feedback (Years 5-6)

The best way to improve is to write, get detailed feedback and write again. Simply email me your child's creative writing for positive, practical feedback that makes a real difference. Please email clare@creativehare.co.uk

Availabilty: None at present

How does it work?

Choose from one of my picture or written prompts, which I can send to you. Or simply send me a piece of your child’s writing that they have completed at home. Please ensure the writing is a minimum of two paragraphs and no more than two sides of A4.

Reviews from parents

(9 reviews)

I read her essay afterwards it was impressive and I thought she has improved a lot since taking your class. Thank you!

Year 5 Parent

Your passion for creative writing has rubbed off on my daughter and she learned a lot from your workshop. Thank you so much Clare!

Year 4 parent

Rated 5 out of 5
My daughter loved writing her story and learnt to craft her story (beginning to end) in a structured and thoughtful way.

Parent

Rated 5 out of 5
She liked the tiger picture to give her an idea where to start and because it was an interesting idea. She says her writing is more fun and easier now that she knows where her stories are going. She learned to have a plan which she has used again. She's also learned that it’s ok (and actually even good) to cross things out in her stories. Encouraged to edit. Given lots of positive encouragement and feedback.

Parent

Rated 5 out of 5
Claire's poetry workshop is absolutly amazing and I will highly recommend her!

Parent - South Devon

Her rank moved up more than 100 after her English got marked.

Year 6 Parent

Clare built confidence in creative writing which was highlighted as a strength in his successful 11+ application to Whitgift School.

Year 6 parent

Rated 5 out of 5
She liked the tiger picture to give her an idea where to start and because it was an interesting idea. She says her writing is more fun and easier now that she knows where her stories are going. She learned to have a plan which she has used again. She's also learned that it’s ok (and actually even good) to cross things out in her stories. Encouraged to edit. Given lots of positive encouragement and feedback.

Parent

Thank you so much Claire. She now has a clear structure to approach creative writing with which has give her the confidence to start it. She feels like she now has a toolbox for the whole exercise.

Parent

Frequently Asked Questions

Who is the 11+ creative writing feedback for?

The feedback will be useful for children preparing for a range of 11+ English exams where creative writing is assessed.

What does the feedback include?

Your child’s writing is reviewed with actionable feedback on areas such as vocabulary, sentence structure, creativity, characters and organisation.

How does the pricing work?

One marked piece - valid for one month. Three marked pieces - valid for three months. Six marked pieces - valid for six months.

Will the feedback help my child get a higher 11+ English score?

The feedback will help children develop the writing skills examiners are looking for when they assess papers.

What if my child struggles with creative writing?

That’s absolutely fine. Feedback will identify the most important areas to work on rather than overwhelming your child with corrections. The goal is to give them clear next steps they can actually use.

Do you tutor?

Clare is a private creative writing mentor for kids who already love making up stories and want the time, space and encouragement to write them. Clare has availability from September 2027.
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